22-10-2003 22:40									#31
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Punctuation in the penultimate sentence is very awkward, imo. Better to start new sentence after 'India and Pakistan', as having all those commas after the colon is a little confusing and just sounds wrong.

Last edited by Verres on 22-10-2003 at 22:47

	22-10-2003 23:19									#32
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That's always the hardest part, writing a concise introduction to effectively present your thesis.

Much harder than writing the body of the essay.

	22-10-2003 23:26									#33
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Personally, introductions have never presented much of a problem. It's the actual essay I tend to have difficulty with...run out of steam after the first few paragraphs (precisely what is happening at the minute )

	22-10-2003 23:43									#34
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Same here. I'm writing an essay on the history of UN peacekeeping and I've hit a block, not helped by the fact that I don't really have the right books to enable me to write it.

	23-10-2003 00:16									#35
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another problem is you not knowing jack **** about it, isn't it?

	23-10-2003 00:27									#36
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This is not a problem when you aren't required to cite sources.

Heck, in my last sociology work (23 pages explaining that computer-nerds aren't like the general population), I knew from the beginning what I wanted to say. The biggest problem was to find books to make it look scientific

	23-10-2003 00:43									#37
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quote: Originally posted by Azazel another problem is you not knowing jack **** about it, isn't it?

It certainly doesn't help.

	23-10-2003 02:28									#38
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quote: Originally posted by Urban Ranger Watch the tenses.

quote: While the United States and Europe are waging the war against terror, everybody forgot about the conflict between India and Pakistan, one that

Watch them, watch them!

	23-10-2003 09:40									#39
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quote: Originally posted by MikeH UR... some of that is still a bit dodgy... sorry.

Dodgy? Where?

Besides, I put it together in 5 minutes, so I wasn't expecting much.