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No prob. I origionally wanted to post a small paragraph about it but it had a lot of valuable info that I didn't know so I posted nearly the entire excerpt.

As for your story, its not bad, but I think that your style could use some polishing. In particular, I think that you use quotes and statements too often and at times it becomes confusing without a reference as to exactly who is talking.

Taken for the whole its an entertaining story, keep up the good work.


just happens to be the style I wanted this story to take..

snippets... a short catchup with the world from the face of war
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Late in 1995, way up in the backhills of Borneo, a small group of history students from Canberras Deakin Universtity came across the shattered remains of a World War II single seat fighter.

The pilots remains were not that well preserved, but in searchingb through the cockpit they came upon a pocket knife, the engraving - Charlie.

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is there more Paddy?

just asking great job my friend
nice pics too!
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that's all mate

 
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