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Apr 2003 time: 23:35
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Kody and I discussed a little about the narrators' roles after I came back. And we decided that Kody would focus more on the IC stories and the newspapers, etc., while I would put some efforts on recording the team's history.
My plan is I will post a paragraph for each Gaians turn here, and then after receiving your comments and everything, I will bring it back to the CMN forum, encorporate it in the history thread which would include other teams. When time goes by and Gaians feel that the information consisted for certain years is not confidential to a certain team or all the teams any more, the history of the relevant years will be shared with the relevant teams.
I haven't been following the game play closely, so it would take me sometime to back construct the story. When I catch up with the game hopefully it will become easier for me.
I'm using IC format for the history so that it won't be too boring to read. Please let me know if anybody has any objection or suggestions about any details in the writings. Also some years I will write more in details and others I will cover briefly.
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falling, once again
Apr 2003 time: 23:35
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Lord smacksim rushed into the Gaians headquater flustered and exasperated, “Who had sent the colony pod into the fungus?”
“The CP went in the fungus?” Lord Obstructor raised his head from his desk, surprised.
They both looked at Lord Chaos Theroy who was still studying the meeting notes. Yes giving the amount of communications in the meeting it would really require quite some energy for anybody who wanted to make any sense of it. “I did. Was there something wrong?”
“Something wrong? Well I’d say yes. Didn’t you know that the fungus area could be where those dangerous mindworms live? Out of all the directions that the colony pod could go, it went into the little fungus patch where we know nothing about.”
“There's not much to worry about from random native life at this point, because our scout is with the colony pod and will be able to counter a worm attack easily. And on the off chance that the worm wins, the colony pod should still be able to fend off what's left.” Chaos Theory replied.
“Ah well, NW or W for the CP is very different than North. Now we are kinda stuck IMO. But you all seem to think that's the right thing to do, so go for it.” Lord smacksim turned around and left with his grumbling words trailing off.
“I would have tried to move SP north and then CP either N or NW.” Obstructor followed smacksim out of the camp, leaving Lord Chaos Theroy alone mumbling, “Why haven’t anybody said anything when I asked for confirmation of the plan in the meeting.”
“Where is our science/research officer?” Lord Net Worrior entered the camp facing a grumpy Chaos Theroy. “We should have allocated more people to focus on research. That would reduce the time of our next break through from 14 to 7 years.”
Chaos Theory replied coldly, “Then you should have brought up this issue at the meeting. It's not something I usually think of.” Looking at the taken aback Net Worrior, Chaos theory sighed, and added, “I will send the orders out this time.”
Lord Chaos Theory stepped outside of the headquarter with a heavy heart. He really wished that the election of government officials could end soon so that he could get some concrete help. Knowing the Gaians, however, he did not hold much hope.
A girl in green robe approached Lord Chaos Theroy with a piece of paper. Rather nice looking with her innocent and admiring eyes … thought Chaos Theory while he read the flyer:
After a continuous state of disarray and disorganisation following the Planetfall, including mostly failed elections of 2102, Lady Deirdre has decided to intervene, and manually setuped the government, suspending failing results of elections.
New government is called Senior Council of Lords, and is compromised from:
Lord of Development (appointed Chaos Theory)
Lord of Security (appointed Obstructor)
Lord of Progress (appointed Net Warrior)
Chairman of the Council of Lords (appointed Chaos Theory)
Deputy Chairman of the Council of Lords (appointed smacksim)
Lord Administrator (appointed Obstructor)*
This positions shall last for four turns, until next elections in four years, MY 2106.
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Apr 2003 time: 23:35
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"Lady Skye, we are receiving transmission from Lord Smacksim."
"Put him in."
"Mylady, we have just received news from our colony pod. They have succeded in traversing the fungus and they expect to exit fungal field next year. What is more important, we have discovered rainy terrain north." Lord Smacksim's voice seemed to be filled with enthusiasm.
Deirdre Skye was pleased that her children were learning to thrive without her help. "At last! Now our people will survive!"
"Lady Skye, may I request that you allow hurrying production of the terraforming unit? We are short of energy supply, and the sooner we build the solar collector the faster we can expand and develop."
"Of course. You do know that you do not need to ask for confirmation of your orders?" Deirdre kept her tone warm, although she really hoped that they would not bother her with such oprational details every day.
"My mistake," Deirdre could almost see the flush on Smacksim's face. "I did not wish to disturb you, but Lord Chaos went to join the colony pod, and I want to be perfectly sure about orders."
Deirdre smiled. "Very well, now carry on."
Oh yea, thanks for the hint smacksim. I remember seeing a transport somewhere myself. 
[Edit] Post edit to add 2103 piece.
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Apr 2003 time: 23:35
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An earthquake rattled Fallow Time in the second morning that the new base was founded. The exaughsted girls and boys were deep in their dreams for the first time, away from the worry about possible mindworm attacks when suddenly the ground shook violently, sending them to the floor from their beds. The entire base went into chaos once again. Julius started to wonder if he should ask Lord Chaos Theroy to change his name. But he felt relieved when everything calmed down and he leant that nobody was hurt during the incident.
It was reported that the earthquake was triggered by the Gaians scout investigating a malfunctioned unity pod. The Gaians high council commenced a temporary halt to all investigations toward unity pod.
Grapes were planted at Fallow Time in memory of this incident.
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Apr 2003 time: 23:35
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Lord Obstructor was fuming. “Disasters after disasters! And those strange communisque that we received is so irritating. I don’t care if that means other human factions have survived the landing crash, of if it was simply some tricks of those evil mindworms. I am quitting!”
In a minute he was swamped by a large group of people trying hard to persuade him to chang his mind, all attempting to shout louder than the others. “… Please don’t go, you are a great leader for us…” “…You have been a moving force behind the Gaian's and it would be extremely unfortunate to loose you. Please reconsider!” “We’ve just finished our first former and the best is still to come …” “We even found our first river …”
The next morning everybody in the Gaians was glad to received a note from their beloved Lady Deirdre, “Lord Illuminatus is to replace Lord Obstructor in full capacity.”
Lord Smacksim strolled along the river. Yes finally they have found a river, after searching for years. The planet had been testing their faiths. Every analysis showed that without rivers, and hydroenergy gained from them, Gaian Union shall fall behind lacking adequate energy sources. Now, they had something to plan, a future that was brighter than before.
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Deputy Chairman of the Council of Lords of Gaia
Feb 2004 time: 00:35
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quote: Originally posted by Chaos Theory
I like the description of the events surrounding the second colony pod |
Me too. I fondly remember storming out of HQ dissatisfied with our CP's direction. And how Chaos remained calm and reasonable: 'Well, why didn't anyone say anything?' Hehe.
Can I add an imaginary timeline for our agriculture? Like what year the first White Pines were planted and what year the grapes matured, etc.? You could then reference it for added detail, if you wanted. Here's what I imagine:
- 2101: White Pines planted around Gaia's Landing (As per the game quotes about that)
- 2102: First attempts to eat Xenofungus unsuccessful
- 2103: First Xenobannana tree discovered
- 2104: Grapes planted at Fallow Time: Since it's on a river, we could rename it Fallow Rhine, btw

- 2105: First Hybrid trees grown in a forest near Gaias Landing (not true, but good story)
- 2106: First grapes from Fallow Rhine turned into wine. Vintage 2106 becomes valuable immediately
- 2107 Roadside arbors planted along road to Fallow Time (not true, no road, but again, just for story)
- 2108 Xenofungus found to be quite edible, especially flavorful from the Ebbin Flow river gardens
- 2110: Solar Panels found to help Xenotomatoes grow
- etc..
If you don't want to use any of that, that's fine. I was just thinking outloud, so to speak.
Edit: Also, I would find it fun to write about the Gaian sailors. just saying 'Gaian Sailors' makes me laugh for some reason. Let me know if you could use my writing about their adventures.
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Feb 2004 time: 00:35
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Personally, I think we should write in the VOP about the navy. It's so hard for them to guess, it'll add panache to our spin. Here's a little sea shanty our boys did sing on the way out from harbor. Note that the song is about a gunfoil, and wouldn't even have been written yet! But maybe they adapted it from an old Earth sea shanty, as I did....
When Hydro and Cosmic and Colonyan, they walked the capstan round,
Upon the strangest craft that was ever seaward bound,
The music of their voices from tree to fungus rang,
As they sang the first sea shanty that Gaian sailors ever sang...
'Twas in twentyone hundred and three
In June, the thirteenth day
That our Gunfoil her anchor weighed
And for Hiveland sailed away, brave boys
And for Hiveland sailed away.
The lookout on the cross-trees stood
With a spyglass in his hand
There's a worm, there's a worm
There's a wormfish, he cried,
And she blows at every span, brave boys
She blows at every span.
The captain stood on the quarterdeck
And a fine little Gaian was he
Overhaul! Overhaul!
Let your native nets do fall
And launch your rafts for sea, brave boys
And launch your rafts for sea.
The rafts where launched with the men aboard
And the Isle of the Deep was in view
Resolved was each seaman bold
To steer where the wormfish blew, brave boys
To steer where the wormfish blew.
We netted that Isle, and the line played out
But she gave a flourish with her tail
The raft capsized and four gaians were drowned
And we never caught that Isle, brave boys
And we never caught that Isle.
To lose that worm, our captain said
It grieves my heart full sore
But, oh, to lose four gallant men
It grieves me ten times more, brave boys
It grieves me ten times more.
The winter star doth now appear
So, boys, we'll anchor weigh
It's time to leave this cold country
And homeward bear away, brave boys
And homeward bear away.
Oh, Hiveland is a dreadful place
A land that's never green
Where there's ice and snow
And the worm fishes blow
And daylight's seldom seen, brave boys
And daylight's seldom seen.'
That's just a song. I'll write some adventure stories now.
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Deputy Chairman of the Council of Lords of Gaia
Feb 2004 time: 00:35
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"Lord Hydro! Captain! Sir!" Colonyan called out at the top of his lungs. But Captain Hydro, First Admiral and Lord Commander over all the Gaian Fleet, could not have heard him. Even at short distances, the shearing roil of the sea, the erratic slamming against the sturdy hull of the vessel by eight foot swells, was overpowering, crushing, and barely survivable, as Hydro was finding to his distraction.
"Come away from there Sir!" Colonyan continued to bellow from the foredeck.
Hydro looked up, untangling his wrist from the kelp that threatened to engulf his liferaft and clearing some of the sea foam from his face and eyes. He could barely make out the waving sillouette of someone above, someone who was apparently aggitated and waving frantically, seemingly for his benefit.
"It must be Colonyan" Hydro thought with a smile. Those new sailors were always getting over-excited at the smallest hint of adventure. That he should choose to investigate the wreckage himself was his perogative as Captain. "No use in getting jumpy Colonyan" he muttered to himself. "There'll be plenty of adventures ahead of us I reckon, son. Plenty that you won't want to remember, I'm sure".
Staring at the tangled junkpile in the dark and haze and sea-mist, Hydro briefly recalled his first voyages as a boy. Once, while skipping school, he and a friend had 'accidentally' sailed from Conneticut to Staten Island. Boy did they ever get into some trouble in those days! Why that particular voyage came to mind, he couldn't guess.... Perhaps it was that strange fellow they had met by the name of...what was it...Einstaggle?...Einhurst? Yes, that was it. Before I went into Cryogenic sleep I saw that man again. He was a scientist. That's who Prokor Zhakarov reminds me of! That crazy scientist who told me that I would one day prove him right. Prove what? If only the Cryo-sleep didn't make my old memories so hazy.
Lord Hydro turned back to the task at hand. Laying a bolt-cutter across the main seal and heaving with all his weight he pulled off the top to the unity pod and peered inside. Oh what a stench! Covering his mouth and nose with his sleeve, Hydro turned on the funga-lamp and directed it's reddish beam to the interior...... A Rover!
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"Sir, I didn't know what happened to you. Did you turn your comlink off? Are you o.k.?" said First Bosuns Mate Colonyan.
"I never thought I'd be so glad to encounter one of these landlubber trucks" said Hydro.
"So it is a Unity Rover then, Sir?" said an approaching well dressed sailor.
"First Mate Cosmic"
"Yes Cap'n?"
"Can you drive one of these things?"
"Why yes, sir, I had extensive training while on duty with ...."
"Good!" interupted Lord Hydro, "We put to shore in the morning. I want you to drive that thing back to Headquarters and give a report to the Council of Lords".
"Of course, sir, but may I ask, what is so urgent that I should drive seventy clicks across unknown shores and leave you without a first mate?"
Laughing heartily and putting an arm around Cosmic's shoulders, Lord Hydro turned to Colonyan "That'll be all, sailor. Make sure the rover is ready in the morning."
"Yes sir!" said James 'Kickstart' Colonyan, who, besides being First Bosuns Mate was also Chief Medical Officer of the Unity Foil 'Endeavor's Heart'. He turned down the deck to gaze aft at the impressive wake of their fair vessel. "I do wonder who'll be First Mate when Cosmic leaves...."
"Cosmic, I know you are younger and fitter than I. I also know that you would love to be Captain Cosmic one day soon. Well sailor, that day is not far off, I reckon. I think I know where to find our good friend the Professor. And you know what that means. We can get a real navy started. You'll not just be captain. You'll be an admiral of an entire ocean. But we have to bail the boat we have at the moment, no?"
"I think I see where you are going, sir. You want to send to Lady Deirdre and request that native units be sent in the direction of University territories for establishing diplomatic relations?"
"You read me exactly, Captain Cosmic"
And with that, Lord Hydro pinned the stripes and Gaian emblems of captaincy on Cosmic's shoulder.
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