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Ipanema
Jul 2002 time: 02:20
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We had (nye and me) a brief chat at MSN with Wosret. I've sent the treaty to him.
So far, the only change will be the number of the turns, 25 changes to 26, turn 26 changes to 27, and so on. That's because they have played the turn already.
Here is the treaty:
quote: Originally sent to CBR
In order to formalize our friendship and our desire to maintain peaceful relations, the nations of Brazucas and Apolyton hereby agree to the following treaty:
1.Alphabet and bronze working shall be traded between our two nations. On turn 25, Brazucas will send alphabet unaccepted to Apolyton. Apolyton will put bronze working on the table and accept the deal. On turn 26, Brazucas will accept the deal, thus completing the trade. Apolyton agrees not to trade Alphabet to any other nation or team. Brazucas agrees not to trade Bronze Working to any other nation or team.
2. As of turn 25, a fifty turn non-aggression pact between the nations of Brazucas and Apolyton shall go into effect. Neither team shall attack the other, and no unit (except for the curragh) may enter within one tile of the other nation's cultural borders without their consent.
3. On turn 26, the nations of Brazucas and Apolyton will trade unaltered screenshots of all explored lands which includes the land inside of each nation's borders, but doesn't include units, combat and non-combat. All resources and terrain improvements shall be shown, but the production, current research and time, treasury (current gold and gold per turn), and slider settings shall not be shown, either cut out in a screenshot program or blacked out. Both nations agree not to pass on traded screen shots to any other nation or team.
4. Information as to the whereabouts of the other nations on this world shall be issued to the other party once the foreign nations have been met.
5. This treaty comes into effect upon being ratified by both nations named herein.
To this end, Brazucas and Apolyton humbly wish that this treaty is the beginning of a lasting friendship, where the world hides in fear of the combined might of Brazucas and Apolyton!
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Ipanema
Jul 2002 time: 02:20
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quote: Originally posted by RegentMan
Sigh... 
quote: Originally posted by RegentMan
Could you put a space between "1." and "Alphabet?" Also, we'll need to change the turn numbers before we send it, how about turn 30 for starting everything?
In the tech trade, it says that they can't trade bronze working, but nothing of our ability to trade alphabet. Think they'll notice?
In the screenshot trade, I've used it as one word. You use "screen shot" in the no trade clause. I suggest changing it to one word to maintain the same type of language throughout the document (argh... I forgot the word! ).
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Sorry, I never noticed your post. Neither nye, I suppose. 
Anyway, we could correct any formal (Is it the right word?) mistake, because we didn't sign yet, they are checking the agreement. Last minute little changes are allowed,,,
And about any diplomatic mistake... Well, they will correct it, for sure. If they don’t, it's our choice notice it or not. 
One interesting thing about our private forum. You can edit any post... (see your post above ) Next time, you may correct the mistakes, if the responsible (me) is a moron! 
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