28-05-2001 13:28									#1
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where is that story by Raging Mouse? and will there be more to it? i really enjoyed it, a big thumbs up from me. i even found myself feeling protective to the little University girl (she usually likes to wear red and white)

anyway- loved the story Mouse, look forward to it reapearing and having a good ending.

	28-05-2001 16:26									#2
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http://apolyton.net/forums/showthread.php?threadid=8568

Right behind of the veil of 10 days.

	28-05-2001 17:41									#3
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There will be more, I promise you; I have four chapters written, but I will post the next chapter only when I have written a fifth. That's how I work right now. But luckily, summer's beginning! I will have more time to write, and hopefully the inspiration will be there as well...

	28-05-2001 20:05									#4
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>fixes Mouse with a firm and unamused stare<

just post em okay buddy.

	28-05-2001 20:35									#5
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must complement you on the way you translated the Probe Ops from the game to the story by the way, i often wonder how asmall group of the covert military could take over an entire city. i'm glad the way you an Allie think of a new "realistic" interpretation of those impossible orders i often give my Most Honorably Patriotic Probe-Teams.

"Now get out there an act like you own the place".

	04-06-2001 22:10									#6
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Well that's chapter 71 posted. I hope this is a sign that summer is doing my inspiration some good. Chapter 76 is well underway.

	13-06-2001 02:59									#7
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Are you going to incorporate Problem_Child into the story too? I loved the new chapters. Nice to see the Spartans involved a little as well. Keep up the good work. And I am still waiting for my intrance as a really good bad guy.

	13-06-2001 13:50									#8
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Awww; after a post like that, how could I not do this? Take a look at the next chapter, Sprayber!

EDIT: Oh, and I'll incorporate Problem Child only if he wants me to.

Last edited by Raging Mouse on 13-06-2001 at 14:07

	13-06-2001 14:26									#9
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Kewl. Love the whole series Heh heh, and I love the fact that you used some of the forum people's names, makes for an interesting touch to the story (especially if they get squished)

	15-06-2001 11:25									#10
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Hmm... Didn't like using my name ?

	15-06-2001 20:23									#11
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Eh? Wha? Oh. That. Nah, I'm too softhearted a little wimp to gruesomely kill you without permission.. (I've got Sprayber's permission to kill off his, btw). But not too soft not to gruesomely hurt and maim, it seems....

	16-06-2001 00:25									#12
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thanks for the suggestion Sprayber

Mouse, I'd be honoured to appear in the story ,

the name problem_child is from a *book in which a deep-space exploration vessel (machine-intelligent) called Problem Child encounters a being/craft/time-machine from another existence, so thats some context- just in case the names not to portable.

but- I'd like not to be a:

Believer
Cultist
Hivean
Drone
Nautilan

and i'm not really partial to the Corpo's either

Mouse-tro, do your work

*Iain M Banks, The Excession

	17-06-2001 03:12									#13
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You're in, Problem_Child. Your curtain call is at chapter 77.

	20-06-2001 22:10									#14
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nice, mind tellin me a few things about my character?

	21-06-2001 03:23									#15
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You wanna know in advance? OK. This is what I've nailed down so far: He'll be a University diplomat with Armenian ancestors. His actual name is Problem Child in russian, but I don't know russian so I've got no idea how that sounds.. so he's Problem Child in the story. Period.

	21-06-2001 11:55									#16
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Just a few details- don't give anythin away! anyway that should be fine.

Armenian aye, interesting choice.

	21-06-2001 12:37									#17
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Besides, it could feel a little weird if you saw cyrillic names in the middle of English text...

(Turn Cyrillic encoding on)

Problem Child should be "проблема ребенок" in Russian, or at least that's what the dictionary says.

	09-10-2001 00:02									#18
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(bump)Yay! More Wizard of Chiron!(/bump)