17-07-2001 02:56									#1
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So what does anyone think of my latest attempt at SMACX storytelling?

D4

	17-07-2001 03:25									#2
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Not bad at all. I liked the way Morgan tried to wriggle out about the military loss.



Oh, and don't forget to check "The Homeworld", by Kassiopeia!

I see you are German. Hence your mother language isn't English. Same here. Because of that, I think that my English stories lack more verbally then my Finnish written stories. You don't seem to crash on the language barrier at all. Cripes.

	17-07-2001 09:09									#3
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Both of you guys come across very well.

	17-07-2001 10:54									#4
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Actually, I'm not german....I just live in germany. I'm a US soldier stationed in Germany. (At least for a few more months)

D4

	17-07-2001 10:58									#5
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quote: Originally posted by D4everman Actually, I'm not german....I just live in germany. I'm a US soldier stationed in Germany. (At least for a few more months) D4

Your stories are still good.

	17-07-2001 23:25									#6
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Solid work! You've not only told a good story so far, within the confines of the game world, but also managed to add a healthy dose of humour. I particularily liked the segment with the black marketeer in Believer land. "Love Slave of Planet" indeed! I think this is one of the funniest pieces since that Hillbilly faction story a while back, with the added benefit of being a full-scale "serious" story as well. Keep up the good work.

	18-07-2001 02:32									#7
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Thanks! I'm glad you found humour in it. I got the idea from my experiences in Desert Storm actually. We were told that things like playboy mags were illegal in saudi but i knew a lot of guys (not me...I swear) that sold nudie mags to local nationals for ridiculous prices. (One guy I know sold a penthouse to a saudi man for 90 bucks!)

D4

	18-07-2001 03:00									#8
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I think everyone under 18 would buy a nude mag for 90 bucks
I liked the "Artisan Beck" part the most. It was not funny, but it really told how a whole planet can stop when a soul of great talent is lost.
And it seems that I'm the only one that writes fiction without using his mother language. But that's no excuse, no reason not to kill my story.

	18-07-2001 11:08									#9
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li liked your story Kass...I'm eagerly awaiting more.