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Vultur is offline Vultur
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Jun 2000
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Here you can post comments, remarks, questions or an evaluation
on this short story.

Thank you for your interesting

-Vultur
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Oct 2000
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It's great. If you have more post it. We must have more.

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That was nice! 1) Lal being the Planet Busting Guy, 2) The way he grovels at the end.
Next time I'd like to see Morgan groveling Deirdre... or vice versa *perverse smile*
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At first I didn't feel very attracted by the lack of paragraphs and by the style, but in the end they both added to the value of the story. Excellent plot even in this small story .
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 Originally posted by kassiopeia
I'd like to see Morgan groveling Deirdre... or vice versa *perverse smile*


I've no plan for others history of this type...
I've called this one "The Sinner" only because Lal known what he was doing... and he was not sure.
I hoped that the reader -for a while- ask to himself: who's writing? Miriam? Yang? Cha? he/she is mad? or he/she has reason?
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