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Lord Zalzabad
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Dec 2001 time: 05:23
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I tried to write a story, but it was too hard! trying to get into other peoples heads, and then there was the commitment, so I have given up!
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Mellian
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given what up? what were you trying to do?
if you want to clarify somethings, can do so in this thread.... that is what his thread is for, to discuss the game, ideas, plots and so on
-Mellian
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Apep
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Do I need to download anything to play this?
Is the position of Religious Advisor available? How about the position of cultural Advisor? Or are they the same thing?
Do I really need a signature?
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Jack_www
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as far as I know it cultural advisor is open, no one is playing the cultural advisor. You dont need to download anything, just post what you do in the game thread.
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Jack_www
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I read that you said you put codes of laws with in the Consitution of the new Republic for Apolyton. A Consitution is more of how a government is to be fromed and runed. If you at the US consitution, no were in it does it have laws, like murder is illegal, stuff like that. It has the foundation of how the United States government is to be runned. I think putting laws into it is not such a good idea. It is better to spreate the two.
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Jack_www
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quote: Originally posted by foolish_icarus
i would like to take part in the apolytonian empire...are there any requirements? |
No there is not requirements to be in the story. Just find a open spot in government, and we can write you in, or you can just be a normal everyday person in the Apolyton Empire.
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Jack_www
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more about the consitution in the story. A lot of the stuff you put in there took a long time devoloped the ideas and concepts. Also too like the trade adivorsor in the game said, right now Apolyton is running under the serf system, and I think any such changes would be opposed by the merchant class and other groups. I am just trying to be realistic. As for owning guns and weapon, this is the 1400's not modern age. Almost everyone owns some type of weapon, be a sword which I think would be more common, to muskets already.
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Mellian
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yes, but the rights to bear arm was in place of the american constitution mainly because the populace would be able to defend themselves against the english...and also maybe because to keep the government in line....which is a pretty fruitless attempt with modern US, especially with Bushy as prez
also, doesn't mean require people to have them or say it isn't allowed by not mention it in the constitution.
Why would the merchants have problems with the constitution, especially if it doesn't say anything about Trade and Economy?
As for the nobility, my impression so far that they don't really exist in apolyton.... closest ones to bbe considered nobility are Governors, who are picked from anywhere pretty liberally...like the Advisors and Military commanders.
also, don't confuse Monarchy with feudalism.
-Mellian
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Jack_www
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quote:
Liam Sheep after having his hideout blown up to smithereens has relocated to an unkown region of the world to conitue his war against the corrupt government in Apolyton.
There was an assaination attept against Chief of Staff Melian and the famous COlonel Cognac. Cognac, had been hit by the bullet, but Sheep has yet found out if he will survive. Melian escaped the blast of Gunpowder at her headqauters, as she was out of the office at the time. However 100 dedicated staff and scribes of the Chief persished.
That is all
FOR THE REVOLUTION!!!!
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Sheep I dont mind having someone fighting against us, but you need to keep some things in mind when you post things. First off this is the 1400's. If you want to blow any kind of buildings up you would need tons of gun powered, and that is not so easy to sneek past anyone. Anther thing is that Colonel Cognac is in the woods hiding and going on covert missions, not even the Apolyton Army knows exactly were he is, so how could one of your agents know were he is??? He has no contact with the outside world, expect when he sends out s rider to tell us what he has done and seen. So this does not make any sense.
Please, if you want to plot against us make it more interesting. Just posting random bombings and assainations gets old after a while, and people get sick of it. Also if you kill our chacters in the story, then that means we are out of the game. You want most of the main chacters of a story to live so you can acutally have something to write about.
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Mellian
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As for Wonders....
Apolyton as the Great Library
England as Magellan
Egypt as the Pyramids
Babylon as the Hanging Gardens
China as Sun-Tzu and the Great Wall (only civ with two wonders at the moment)
thats all i have at the moment... rest can be made up... also possible to make some new wonders and small wonders... as long it makes sense or copy the same benefits from another.
-Mellian
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Mellian
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quote: In the Gunpwder Plot in Britain by the Catholics to blow up the Queen, they only failed when one member ragged on the scheme. |
umm, Apolyton Palace was heavilly defended by the military, unlike the Queen's palace.
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Now if you want excitement in the story thats all fun and games, but as the story is progressing everone is all rosy with each other, the wart against the English can't go wrong. Now I don't want to play this kind of game.
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thee war can go wrong, but yur not being very creative and imaginatibe simply go around trying to assassinate and blow up stuff without much description.
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Bah I hav had it with you jokers. This NES is gay! |
First of all, APolyton Empire is not a NES. Second of all, i don't tolerate you using the "gay" in such a way.
Your the weakest link, buh bye.
-Mellian
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Mellian
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Just to inform you Sheep, i am keeping the moderators informed of this, so suggest you behave.
-Mellian
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mmtt
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It may be better to deal this with pms or whatever. I don't think flame war is really interesting IMHO.
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civman2000
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of the Martian Empire
Jun 2001 time: 23:23
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Sheep: If you would give some background to your actions it would be better. Yes, we don't know what your organization is doing internally, but it's still part of the story.
Also, I think it might be a nice idea for us to start losing the war...
proposal: If there is a unanimous vote (not including the person to be removed), someone can be removed from the game.
Last edited by civman2000 on 21-11-2002 at 23:25
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Jack_www
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To Sheep:
Here is what I would do if I were your character in the story(note this is just some ideas)
One, try to find out what the Apolyton Army war plans are and give them to the English. This would really make the war bad for Apolyton and give the English upper hand.
Two, try and use the Republic movement to my advantage to take over the government some how, or place people into government that would be friendly towards me.
Three try and see if I can make allies in the Apolyton government. Maybe in millitary. If you get backing of millitary, that could help alot.
These are just some things I thave thought of and I am sure you can come up with more. We just get sick of your random assianations and bombings. You only post one a week, and when you do what you post makes no sense. We want to have interesting story, if you feel you can make it more interesting, with out having to have random assinations and bombings, and have real spy stuff going on, then write it.
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Mellian
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okay, we need ideas to make Apolyton Empire more interesting then just wars....
so any ideas anyone? i have a few, but don't want to simply throw it in...
-can have a short-live plagued that kills thousands
-another civil war, followed by the moderator's death... like between the peaceful republicans, militant republicans, monarchist aristocrats, and so on.
-we can begin peace talks once we surround London, which Elizabeth couldn't escape...and surrendered after massive cannon bombarbment, no realize the Apolyton forces have become after York, Warwick, Conventry and the heavy fighting in and out of London.
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