10-07-2003 23:36									#1
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dedicated to Freeway, Beanie Sigel, Young Chris, Sparks, Peedi Crakk, Oschino, Major Figgaz, Cassidy...

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called Where Ya At?


what yall think?

	10-07-2003 23:44									#2
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i'll have a listen, but not until the long version of blank and jones - cream has finished playing

	10-07-2003 23:47									#3
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	10-07-2003 23:51									#4
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it's alright, losses it a bit at about 1.00, but you get back on track quickly

not bad at all after that, but i think i'll get back to listening to blank and jones

	11-07-2003 00:41									#5
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Az:

click "Lo-Fi"

and thanks for taking a listen, cockney. but what is blank and jones?

	11-07-2003 09:51									#6
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"Just because I was a fascist bastard, yall had me blasted" -Philly rapper Cassidy

	11-07-2003 09:55									#7
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Word tah yo mutha, dawg.

	11-07-2003 10:04									#8
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Not my genre, but nice work.

	11-07-2003 10:06									#9
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Better than last time.

	11-07-2003 10:14									#10
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Raise the volume of the music a bit: You can hardly hear any rhythm behind those words.

	11-07-2003 10:15									#11
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Wow, great work, I'm feelin' it dog. Keep it up.

	11-07-2003 10:54									#12
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quote: what yall think?

You've got a decent rapping voice, but you need to work on your flow. You're spitting out the lyrics too quick and not really working with the beat. The beat is what gets people bobbing their heads and you don't want your rapping to take away from that.

Also, I love CB4, but what the hell was that reference about right at the start? Hardcore songs don't usually refer to movies that mocked the absurdity of hardcore rap.

	11-07-2003 20:45									#13
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yeah i've been told i'm too fast for every beat i choose... although in this case, i dont think it's completely my fault because the beat is kind of weird sounding and the rhythm is hard to pick up what with that constant screeching kind of noise all throughout.

well the first two lines were taken from Nas' The Message where he raps, "Fake thug, no love, you get the slug, CB4 gusto, your luck low..." like i said, this is 'dedicated' to all those philly rappers who are big now and i feel many are not repping right. so i'm borrowing Nas' CB4 line against fake hardcore rappers... i dont know if my song itself is truly hardcore; its just more hardcore than other songs i've done. but in any event, i think cb4 more mocked fake hardcore rap than hardcore rap period.


thanks

	11-07-2003 20:51									#14
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Lyrics are good but it's a bit out, it sounds like you are a bit too fast but I think the problem is you are coming in a bit late. Your rhythm is right but because the beat comes in slowly at the beginning of the bar you are struggling to hit the first beat of the bar.

Still good but not as good as some of your others.