20-07-2003 04:46									#1
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www.soundclick.com/bands/0/phillysouljahmusic.htm

"Help Wanted" about employment
"My Girl"... i got sunshine... nah not that one in the vein of 2pac's "Me & My Girlfriend"


thanks

Last edited by Albert Speer on 20-07-2003 at 04:52

	20-07-2003 10:39									#2
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cough...

	20-07-2003 10:41									#3
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Am I the only one who thought this might be about baseball after looking at the title?

	20-07-2003 10:43									#4
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lol

	20-07-2003 11:45									#5
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you might want to take something for that cough

	20-07-2003 16:54									#6
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I suggest something from a water pipe.

	22-07-2003 10:22									#7
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one last time up...

	22-07-2003 10:32									#8
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Hey Alb, I checked out your latest two tunes, and I have to say that they're both really strong. The "Help Wanted" tune is especially profound because of it's strong philosophical message, and "My Girl" is a good love-ballad.

My only critiques would be that "My girl" is just screaming for a catchy chorus of some sort, easier said than done, I know, but that could really put this ish on the map. Also, I am just little bit skeptical toward the production of "Help Wanted". I thought that it could use a more sorrowful beat of some sort , to help the mood and all.

Other than that, extremely strong offerings as per usual Alb.

	22-07-2003 10:41									#9
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profound cause of its strong philosophical message? lol man... it was just some **** i put together while looking for a job. but if you take a deep meaning from it... but really? the beat from Help Wanted don't sound sorrowful? i thought it did sound kind of dark and all that but alright.

as for My Girl... you do realize that it was an extended pun/metaphor right? you know it wasn't a love song to a girl, right?

but thanks for listening... much more than i can say for other people in this thread

	22-07-2003 10:45									#10
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quote: Originally posted by Albert Speer profound cause of its strong philosophical message? lol man... it was just some **** i put together while looking for a job. but if you take a deep meaning from it... but really? the beat from Help Wanted don't sound sorrowful? i thought it did sound kind of dark and all that but alright.

The beat was good, I am just saying that it is the one area that could maybe optimized a little.

quote: as for My Girl... you do realize that it was an extended pun/metaphor right? you know it wasn't a love song to a girl, right?

Well, I knew some of it was tongue-in-cheek, but I didn't get all of it. If it is all a pun, then that makes it even more brilliant.

quote: but thanks for listening... much more than i can say for other people in this thread

Anytime, dog. Keep creating this ill ****.

	22-07-2003 10:50									#11
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Monkspider:

listen to My Girl again... 'my girls' are guns...

it should have been obvious from the third line... "I still say **** her safety, so lately, she's always ready"... the whole thing is about guns

	22-07-2003 10:53									#12
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Oh alright, that's pretty clever.

	22-07-2003 11:00									#13
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haha alright monkspider... you liked help wanted better though? ironically, it took a lot more effort to write My Girl than Help Wanted though... lol. coming up with the deep philosophical **** is easy

but man listen to my girl again... you'll be hitting yourself cause you didn't realize that ****.

	22-07-2003 11:30									#14
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Hey speer - what did you think of the five year old rapper who was on the jimmy kimmel show tonight?

	22-07-2003 11:34									#15
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You mean the puerto rican kid who was in the 50 cent video for ****sta?

	22-07-2003 11:39									#16
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Perhaps, all I really remember was that he came out wearing a necklace that seemed to be made of christmas ornaments and I started to feel sick.

	22-07-2003 11:44									#17
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thats probably him... was he puerto rican though? black? what?

and it's just like Lil Bow Wow and Lil Romeo... it's stupid as ****... 10 year olds are just barely old enough to listen to rap... they can't be rappers... lil romeo though is only where he is cause he's the son of rapper/business mogul/owner of No Limit Records Master P.

	22-07-2003 11:47									#18
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I think he was puerto rican... maybe. He didn't look that black. And yeah, I just found the whole thing comical, it's like, how can you take something like this seriously???

	22-07-2003 11:51									#19
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mono:

it's just a cute thing that makes all these women go like, "he's so cuuuutttteee" i mean a little boy playing rapper, dressed in a tiny jersey and a chain too big for him

	22-07-2003 15:03									#20
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Aw! Look at the little gangstas! And look at the little nazi crackas! Here's some arsenic-filled candy for you, and you, and YOU!