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Beta

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Prowling in a PBEM near you!
Nov 2002 time: 00:24
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(Ok - here is my proposed intro letter. Please let me know if you think it hits the right note - or if there is anything else we want to say. I may customize it a bit for each civ I'm talking to.)
Esteemed representative of the fine people of ......... I, BetaHound, have been chosen to speak to you on behalf of the Controller and the citizens of Vox Controli. In this correspondence, I am not only introducing myself, but more importantly, the nation of the One Voice - Vox Controli.
As a form of introduction, and to allow you a better insight into our civilization, I have chosen to read to you today, selected readings from The One Book, and more specifically, Jon's letter to the Controllians.
"Controllians 6, Verses 1 to 5.
1. In the beginning, there were many voices. And it was chaos. And it was not good.
2. And 'The Voice' called to jon miller, and he went onto the great mountain, the One Peak. And there 'The Voice' spoke to jon.
3. He spent 18 days and 15 nights on the One Peak (ed Scholars are still debating to this day what jon did for the other 3 nights) and returned with the law of our people on one stone, drawn up as the One Commandment:
4. Thou shalt speak with One Voice.
5. And then there was one controller, chosen by the people, and there was One Voice, and One Voice only. And there was order. And it was good."
This should help to clarify who we are. We are not a fascist state. We are not a dictatorship. We are a small, but well ordered civilization. We are democratic. But we acknowledge, and accept as is our law, the need to speak with One Voice.
We look forward to cordial and productive relations with you, your leaders, and your people. We approach you in friendship, but stand ready to defend our rights, our citizens, and our land.
We speak forthrightly, and expect the same of you. We have long memories.
I know we share the same goal of improving our respective and cherished homelands. Together, we can achieve more. I look forward to further discussions with you.
So, once again, our salutations to you, our honored guest, and to your nation.
Till next we meet, I remain, sincerely yours,
BetaHound
Voice of Foreign Affairs (VFA)
Vox Controli
(woof)
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Eli
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Israel
Jul 2000 time: 07:24
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Sounds great.
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Jon Miller
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good
Jon Miller
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Eli
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Israel
Jul 2000 time: 07:24
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Definetely 1&2. The rest, you should do the way you see fit.
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Jon Miller
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you are our voice
and it is up to you as to how you present us
Jon Miller
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Beta

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Prowling in a PBEM near you!
Nov 2002 time: 00:24
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BTW - here was the extra bit I added to the response to Spain/RolePlay. You will recall they asked for info as to where we are in the world, and we agreed to give them some idea.
"You have asked for our understanding of where we are in the world, in order to facilitate contact as soon as possible. We expect similar information in return.
The Civilization of Vox Controli sits in the Northern Hemisphere, and from our initial understanding of the world, to the East. (As you appreciate my dear sir, perspective is everything.) There is much ocean to be seen, however we reside on a landmass of, as yet, undetermined proportions. It is a fine land, with much promise."
That was two days ago. As of yet, no response. My friendly reminder goes out later today.
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Beta

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Prowling in a PBEM near you!
Nov 2002 time: 00:24
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(Patience young Skywalker...)
And lo and behold - their response. Looks like we have to discuss if we want to reveal our techs - which they will know anyway - we are the Persians - and we would have gone to iron working next - which we did. Do we want to say we have met no one yet - including no barbarians?
And how do you interpret their location? Are they to our east? Or are they east of the centre?
Here's the note:
Diplomacy 2
My friend BetaHound:
We the Spaniards, glorious sons of the sea spirits, merged with the land and forest spirits, envy of the world, would be eagerly looking to meet your people... our explorers can meet yours at the middle(a little to the east) of the world localization, just near the squidda minor constelation. We could enlight your nice people with the secrets of the spirits, and of how to deal with the dead(it is no proper manner to throw them to rot anywere...) and we can teach you the most valuable knowledge of how to carve drawings into stone and give them a meaning... of course, we would like to exachange those for secret knowledge you may have, so if you could please tell about what kind of secrets your wise-men know, we might teach you ours if you teach yours, and of course depending on the valuability of the knowledge we may give or ask for a little gold in adittion to the secret.
Also we would like to know if you have already met some other tribe... fort the land spirits have only revealed to us barbarians so far... no settled tribes as us. Anyway, if the spirits guide our wanderers toward other nations we may come to share knowledge with them. In case you have already met any other tribe, please contact us and maybe we could find a manner to introduce our representants to them.
Also our Lord Togas has expressed great desire of one day contacting your Leader personally, to discuss important matters so that you can also make contact with the mighty voice of El tyranno, Lord Togas (Our One Voice).
May our nations grow prosper and rich, and with the blesses of the spirits!
Nuclear Winter the II
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Seņor Nuclearis Winterius the II,
Squid Lord, Wine Marquis, and Diplomat with the Voxians...
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Eli
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Israel
Jul 2000 time: 07:24
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We should focus on getting Pottery. Granaries are important for plains cities.
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flash9286
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dont trade him the whole map just the mini map
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Jon Miller
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hmm
I have to say that I am not sure if I am a big fan of providing anymore info than chat info
and we could doctor a minimap
(Eli??, could you)
do so so that they do not recoginise things about us of strategic import
also, I think that you should, Beta, verify what they emant by in game and minimap
Jon mililer
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Jon Miller
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(how would you guys feel about doctoring a minimap?
just so that they do not realise things of strategic import (The bottleneck)
Jon Miller
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Eli
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Israel
Jul 2000 time: 07:24
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